You need to more tightly link your 4 panels to aspects of your music video.
Your comments about how your print productions link to the themes of your music video. I suggest you reference the document I sent you re how to organise this question.
Panel 1 (example) link to screen shot from your music video.
Ditto Panels 2, ditto panel 3 and ditto Panel 4.
The same with your magazine advert.
All the way through please.
The examiners need to clearly see that you understand the question.
You need to more tightly link your 4 panels to aspects of your music video.
ReplyDeleteYour comments about how your print productions link to the themes of your music video. I suggest you reference the document I sent you re how to organise this question.
Panel 1 (example) link to screen shot from your music video.
Ditto Panels 2, ditto panel 3 and ditto Panel 4.
The same with your magazine advert.
All the way through please.
The examiners need to clearly see that you understand the question.
At present a mainly proficient response.