Billie you shouldn 't delete any of your posts because I have no record of the revisions I offered you so can't clearly see your progress! Could you keep all posts, remember this Label is for rough drafts. If you still have a copy of your previous answer with my comments could you please re-post. Ta
Better but you tend to describe what the technologies can do with loose references to your own practice!
1) Focus on your own experience with examples of unmanipulated images before you manipulated them on photoshop. If you have examples of the stages of how you put your print productions together then upload them onto your evaluation where you discuss photoshop.
2) Photoshop. Delete the description of the software!!! The examiner knows what the software can do. Focus as advised in 1) above.
3) You begin a section ...I wanted to create....this is mainly generalised waffle. Provide an example of a stage of your production and discuss.
4) You begin a section.....Also due to Adobe - delete this is waffle.
5) Tripods - delete this is not a media technology!!!!
6) YouTube discussion: Say instead something like: .... by uploading your music video onto you tube it is able to reach a wider audience and thus strengthen a potential fan base.....
7) Using YouTube - link to your actual research (examples) and how watching music videos (upload specific examples) inspired aspects of your planning - for example...
9) When discussing dissolve you may wish to explain why you used this effect if you haven't already discussed this in your evaluation. Provide an example from your music video.
I like the way you have examples of specific effects of Premiere Pro and photoshop but too little focus on specific examples from your research, planning and productions to place this higher than a low Level 3. So about half a grade better. Don't delete this post please! I need it if you want me to look at another draft and I don't want to repeat myself! Ta and I appreciate your commitment to improve your work.
Billie you shouldn 't delete any of your posts because I have no record of the revisions I offered you so can't clearly see your progress! Could you keep all posts, remember this Label is for rough drafts. If you still have a copy of your previous answer with my comments could you please re-post. Ta
ReplyDeleteBetter but you tend to describe what the technologies can do with loose references to your own practice!
ReplyDelete1) Focus on your own experience with examples of unmanipulated images before you manipulated them on photoshop. If you have examples of the stages of how you put your print productions together then upload them onto your evaluation where you discuss photoshop.
2) Photoshop. Delete the description of the software!!! The examiner knows what the software can do. Focus as advised in 1) above.
3) You begin a section ...I wanted to create....this is mainly generalised waffle. Provide an example of a stage of your production and discuss.
4) You begin a section.....Also due to Adobe - delete this is waffle.
5) Tripods - delete this is not a media technology!!!!
6) YouTube discussion: Say instead something like: .... by uploading your music video onto you tube it is able to reach a wider audience and thus strengthen a potential fan base.....
7) Using YouTube - link to your actual research (examples) and how watching music videos (upload specific examples) inspired aspects of your planning - for example...
8) Delete section starting "Furthermore...." waffle!
9) When discussing dissolve you may wish to explain why you used this effect if you haven't already discussed this in your evaluation. Provide an example from your music video.
I like the way you have examples of specific effects of Premiere Pro and photoshop but too little focus on specific examples from your research, planning and productions to place this higher than a low Level 3. So about half a grade better. Don't delete this post please! I need it if you want me to look at another draft and I don't want to repeat myself! Ta and I appreciate your commitment to improve your work.
Don't describe!!!!